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A Traditional Ninja Romance - Complete!

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Title: A Traditional Ninja Romance

Author: Sinnatious
 
Summary: TezRyo Ninja AU.  Ryoma's mission:  To infiltrate the Seigaku clan and seduce their leader.
 
Rating: M for violence and yaoi.

Author’s Note:  The last chapter!  I hope that everyone had as much fun reading it as I did writing it.

Ninja are AWESOME.
 
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13

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A Traditional Ninja Romance
 
By Sinnatious
 
Chapter 14
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Consciousness was a fickle thing. Ryoma wandered near it several times, but wasn’t able to drag himself to the stage of coherent thought the first few tries. Once he had a vague sensation of worried voices murmuring around him, and another time of fingers softly brushing his arm. Something was keeping him from fully awakening, though. It was a like a really heavy blanket had been thrown over his head.
 
Eventually, snippets of memory started to worm their way into his thoughts. Tezuka’s smooth baritone; cracking as he shouted his name. Heat, light and smoke. Steel dancing in between flames. The coppery aroma of blood mixing with the acrid scent of burning straw.
 
That’s right, Tezuka and his father were fighting… the house was on fire…
 
Buchou!” he exclaimed, sitting up in bed, arm outstretched. Seconds later he regretted the motion as pained lanced through his body. Ryoma gasped, falling back against the futon.
 
“Don’t move,” Tezuka ordered. “Your wounds are still healing, and you lost a lot of blood.”
 
“At least let me sit up,” he grumbled. Tezuka looked like he was about to argue, but eventually helped him into a sitting position.
 
Once upright, Ryoma glanced about in confusion. The room was very familiar… he was back in the compound. More specifically, Tezuka’s room – the desk had been pushed into the corner. “What-” Where was the burning building?
 
“Inui found your letter.”
 
It took a moment for Ryoma to figure out what he was talking about. “But… I tore that up…”
 
“That is certainly not enough to stop Inui.”
 
The pieces were small. It must have taken him at least a while. He’d hidden them in his futon, too! As though anticipating his next question, Tezuka continued, “Admittedly, it wasn’t complete when I came after you, and not all of it made sense until I heard what your father had to say.”
 
His father… his father. "Buchou," he rasped.  "I failed."  It pained him to utter those words, but they needed to be said.

"You did no such thing."

"But-"

Strong arms encircled him.  "You gave preference to Seigaku's orders over your father's without even thinking.  The true purpose of your mission was to test that."  The arms tightened.  "However, I admit that I did not expect you to undertake a kamikaze run."

"It was the only way I had a hope of killing the old man."

"You should have said something. Did you honestly think that I would send you to your death?"

"Why wouldn't you, after I…”

There was a hand stroking his hair now.  It made him feel sleepy.  "Our intelligence on Echizen Nanjiroh had him as a retired ninja.  Had I been aware that his strength had not significantly diminished, I would have certainly chosen another means of testing your true loyalty."
 
Ridiculous.  "Are you saying that you made a mistake?"  The steely, levelheaded captain of Seigaku's clan never made mistakes.  Everyone knew that.
 
As though reading his mind, Tezuka responded, "Even the best captain can only be as good as his subordinates.  And admittedly, my judgement in this matter was clouded."
 
“But… after I…” He’d betrayed Tezuka. Wasn’t the captain upset? First he’d dumped him and turned to Sakuno, and then his father revealed that even in the first place, it was all an elaborate ruse! 
 
“Your letter was enough. But I admit that things made a lot more sense after hearing that you were acting on your father’s orders.”
 
“Ha?” Ryoma was confused.
 
Tezuka leaned in close to his ear. “Fuji told me about you throwing up.”
 
That bastard. “That could have been anything!”
 
“Long-term acting isn’t among your strengths. Your personality kept changing around me. And even Momoshiro noticed something was off when you started courting Ryuuzaki. I didn’t understand why you would be so upset, though, when you were the one who decided to end things. Now, it makes sense.”
 
“But I still… aren’t you mad? Aren’t you mad at all?” Ryoma demanded. Tezuka hadn’t reacted at all when he dumped him, either. It hurt, Ryoma realised. It hurt even worse than his own betrayal to think that Tezuka cared so little that he wasn’t even upset.
 
“For a while I was. But now that the truth is known, there is no need to be.”
 
Ryoma closed his eyes. His throat felt tight. Did this mean… did Tezuka forgive him? Dare he even contemplate the notion?
 
There was something he’d overlooked, though… “You knew I was an infiltrator?” he asked.
 
“I’m not certain if infiltration really fits what you did, but we suspected.”
 
“Since when?”
 
“Since your battle with Ibu. He’s Fudomine’s ace. There was no way that a rookie without proper training in a dojo or lots of mission experience would have been able to fight him evenly. After that, we became aware of you sneaking out as well, though we could never discover where you went.”
 
“And you let me do the paperwork under suspicion?” Knowing things like the clan’s suppliers and mission details was valuable information for a spy.
 
“I’m sorry to say that I don’t normally do that much paperwork. All of the requests and forms you copied out were dupes. If there was any action upon that misinformation, you would have been exposed as a spy.”
 
Ryoma groaned. “All those hours of paperwork for nothing.”
 
“I wouldn’t say for nothing.” Tezuka’s grip tightened again, though he was being extremely careful of his bandaged shoulder.
 
“Wait… then…” Realisation settled in. He was possessed by the sudden urge to laugh. “Were you…?”
 
Tezuka withdrew from the embrace, looking uncomfortable. “It was Fuji’s idea. Given how you acted around me, he thought it would be more effective than just surveillance. Honestly, I was a little surprised that it worked so well.”
 
Unbelievable. “What are you talking about? I did all the work,” Ryoma scoffed, then glared. “If that was the case, why were you being so difficult about it?”
 
“I wasn’t in favour of the plan. It was only when you came that night that I figured I should go ahead with it anyway. Honestly, I didn’t really know what I was doing.”
 
Ryoma didn’t either, but he wasn’t going to admit it. “So then…”
 
Stiffly, Tezuka glanced away. His cheeks started to glow faintly pink. “I… for me, as well. At some point...”
 
“You cut a deal with my father,” he recalled abruptly.
 
Tezuka didn’t say anything. He didn’t need to.
 
“He was just being a pervert, anyway. I can’t believe he put me through all that for something so stupid.” That wasn’t quite true, either. Nanjiroh had dismissed the matter of continuing the clan, but Ryoma had the niggling doubt that maybe that had been the old man’s intention after all. Ever since Ryoga had vanished during that mission, his father was always worried about his legacy. But Ryoma didn’t want to give Tezuka any reason to doubt the deal, and in any case it was blatantly obvious that the Echizen line wasn’t going continue through him. 
 
Tezuka still didn’t comment. Hopefully he believed it and would let the deal stand.
 
Ryoma lay back on the futon. Sitting up was draining his energy too quickly. “The others?”
 
“Those in the main squad are aware of the situation. They are quite eager to see you after that letter you left.”
 
“Hn.” Ryoma’s face burned at the thought of anyone reading that letter – he’d never intended for another set of eyes to ever see it. He supposed he should be grateful in this one instance, though. If it weren’t for Inui’s nosiness, he’d probably be dead. “One thing bothers me.”
 
“Yes?”
 
“You said you just suspected. How was killing him supposed to test my loyalty?”
 
Tezuka thought on this for a moment, before launching into explanation. “It took a long time to find a connection between you and Samurai Ninja. When we heard the name Echizen-”
 
“You said you didn’t know the name.”
 
“More misdirection, I’m afraid.”
 
“Then why didn’t you follow me, to make sure I’d try to complete the mission? I could have warned him and escaped.”
 
“We were prepared to deal with that consequence. Our primary interest was in preventing a rival clan rising within our own territory – without the need to test your loyalty we probably would have just run him off. I was hoping that if you were loyal to your father that you would simply flee. I’d already decided to let you both go.”
 
“Isn’t that sweet of him?” a smooth voice added from the doorway.
 
Ryoma jumped at the introduction of a third person to their conversation. “Fuji-senpai?”
 
After that, the rest of the main squad spilled into the room in a disorganised mess. “Who pushed me?” Momoshiro yelled.
 
“Fsssshuuuu.”
 
“Ochibiiiiii! I was so worried!”
 
They all crowded around the futon; though Oishi made sure everyone kept back. “Give him room, he has a lot of injuries!” he scolded.
 
“Don’t worry about it, Oishi-senpai,” said Ryoma.
 
“Worry about it? I spent hours stitching you up! I wasn’t sure if you were going to make it! You were stabbed in the leg, cut in the armpit, cheek and elbow, and had a sword go clean through your shoulder! It’s a miracle it didn’t hit any bones! You picked up burns from the fire, and were suffering from smoke inhalation when Tezuka brought you in!” Ryoma winced as Oishi started listing off his injuries. 
 
“Wow, Echizen, you were really put through the ringer,” Momoshiro observed, eyes wide. “Are you okay?”
 
“Fine, Momo-senpai.”
 
“Ochibi is so brave!”
 
“Has exceptionally high pain tolerance,” Inui noted under his breath.
 
“We’re glad Tezuka brought you back safely,” Kawamura added. “And I’m really happy you’re going to stay with the clan.”
 
“Did you all know?” he asked, feeling strangely depressed by the notion. He’d been so careful! When did he slip so badly?
 
“It was just the senior members until a couple of days ago, but even after we discovered your fortnightly wandering, we found it rather difficult to follow you. Your movements were quite peculiar,” Inui reported. 
 
“Trying to follow Ochibi was so tiring,” Eiji complained. “We had to stay so far behind so that he wouldn’t notice us, and then he kept doubling back and changing paths!”
 
Ryoma blinked, thinking that over. Oh. He always followed the path that Horio showed him through the forest out of habit. Maybe that was why it took so long to get to his father’s house every time. Ironic that it was what kept his colleagues from discovering his destination – and probably the very same thing that had saved his life. Tezuka wouldn’t have made it in time otherwise.
 
“We never actually found out where you were going for sure. It was only when Inui found out about your father through chance that we put things together,” Momoshiro explained. He rubbed the back of his neck. “I didn’t think he’d order to you try and seduce Ryuuzaki’s granddaughter, though! That sort of explains a lot.”
 
Sakuno. Ryoma had forgotten about her. He had absolutely no intention of going through with his previous mission if he didn’t have to report to his father anymore. But she was the daimyo’s granddaughter; upsetting her probably wasn’t a great idea.
 
Fuji apparently noticed his concern. “As for Sakuno, just yesterday her grandmother called her back to the estate. She’s been betrothed to a rather nice young noble in the north. They’re getting married in the Spring, I believe. She really wanted to say goodbye to you, but unfortunately you were still unconscious.”
 
How long was he unconscious for, anyway? “That’s, um, a little convenient,” Ryoma commented.
 
Fuji smiled. “You think so too?”
 
Right. Meddlesome ninja at work. He closed his eyes briefly, feeling suddenly tired. “So… no one has any problems with me staying?” It was a little hard to take it all in. Ryoma wasn’t sure what he was more surprised about – that they’d known about his infiltration for so long, or that they were so willing to overlook it.
 
“Of course not, Ochibi! How could you think such a thing?” Eiji exclaimed, moving to hug him before being tugged back by Oishi.
 
“I told you he was badly injured!”
 
Momoshiro scratched the back of his head. “Even after Inui told us to be on the lookout, I had trouble believing it. You sort of fit in, you know? And it’s not like you really betrayed us, or anything. I mean - it wasn’t like you sold information or tried to kill anyone or sabotage missions.”
 
The only one he’d really betrayed was Tezuka, but by some sort of gift of the gods, the captain didn’t appear to care about it anymore. Ryoma supposed that the captain’s own acts of subterfuge sort of evened it out. 
 
“Certainly, our mission success rate has improved with Echizen’s addition to the clan,” Inui quipped.
 
“The brat’s useful,” Kaidoh agreed gruffly.
 
“And everything has been worked out now, right?” Kawamura added helpfully.
 
“Tezuka would be quite upset, otherwise,” Fuji remarked. 
 
It was really amazing. Seigaku was something else indeed. Ryoma didn’t think he’d ever felt this comfortable before in his life.
 
“I get to stay,” he murmured, mostly to himself. Tezuka heard anyway. He picked up his hand, threading their fingers together. 
 
“You’re definitely staying, even if I have to tie you down with wire,” Tezuka said sternly.
 
“Kinky,” Ryoma muttered.
 
The edges of Tezuka’s mouth quirked into a hint of smile. “You scared me,” he admitted softly. “When Inui started reading out your messages, and I realised what you were planning to do…”
 
Ryoma brought their hands to his lips – his body ached too much to do much else. Oishi speaking of his injuries made him uncomfortably more aware of them. “You really don’t care about all that I did?”
 
“Of course I care,” Tezuka said. His voice was as business-like as always, but Ryoma thought he spied a glint of mischief in the captain’s eyes. “But it doesn’t really matter anymore.”
 
At his questioning glance, Tezuka drew back his hand and leant over the futon, placing a hand on the ground either side of his head. “I made a deal with your father, after all. You belong to me, now.” He leant down, and brushed their lips together.
 
It sent thrills through his body. The difference between kisses with Sakuno and Tezuka was like night and day. Ryoma shivered. “What are my orders, Buchou?” he asked breathily.
 
Tezuka didn’t answer; he just captured his lips in another kiss.
 
After a long moment, Momoshiro cleared his throat. “Um, maybe we should leave.”
 
“I would sort of like to stay,” Fuji remarked. Tezuka and Ryoma both froze; they’d briefly forgotten that the others were still in the room with them. 
 
“It is improbable, given Echizen’s injuries, that they would progress to-”
 
“Everybody out!” Tezuka ordered. Ryoma was mildly amused to note that he sounded slightly panicked.
 
Half of them filed out of the room hurriedly, while the other half groaned and dragged their feet, disappointed that their entertainment was stolen from them. 
 
Seigaku really was a very weird clan, but Ryoma didn’t mind. 
 
 

 

Comments

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not_shroom
Jun. 4th, 2008 09:56 am (UTC)
Them kissing while the others were stil in the room!!!!!

♥♥♥♥

EXCUZ ME MUST SQUEAL MY JOY TO ZE WORLD NAO.

(Luna here, btw)
sinnatious
Jun. 4th, 2008 09:59 am (UTC)
You cannot hide your true identity, Hiyoshi-san. -___-
superultragddya
Jun. 6th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
Especially not when it's in the userinfo. xD
aventria
Jun. 4th, 2008 10:36 am (UTC)
It's done! Awesome! I can read it now!

*hates waiting so...usually procrastinates so she can marathon them* *coughcoughcough*

sinnatious
Jun. 4th, 2008 10:58 am (UTC)
Totally understands<-does the same thing with anime.

The appropriateness of that emoticon amuses me to no end. *___*
iluxia
Jun. 4th, 2008 12:16 pm (UTC)
Lazy arse.
gwynhafra
Jun. 4th, 2008 11:53 am (UTC)
Sugoi. I was cracking up at a lot of parts, but what really had me pawned was Horio's sense of direction saving Ryoma. That was the work of a genius!

Ooh. So it was Inui doing jigsaw puzzles. Poor Ryoma when his oh so secret letter was read out loud. Thankfully that wasn't the pages of a diary or they'd be getting a lot of 'unnecessary' information, and Tezuka would fly out of the place faster to kill Ryoma for all those info instead of saving him.

Love the fluffiness. *is buried under a mountain of fluff*

Hope to see your next TezuRyo fic. Spread the pillar love. ^^
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 10:54 am (UTC)
Likes the diary idea better. Dammit!

Hey, you share some of the pillar love spreading duty too. ;)
gwynhafra
Jun. 5th, 2008 12:13 pm (UTC)
XD. The chances of Ryoma writing in a diary...0.1 percent...XD

Mm...busy turning some chars into animals at the moment. Blame my pal for that. For now doing SanaYuki, then Silver Pair, and if I'm hardworking enough, TezuRyo.

Gah! Speaking of which, I'm supposed to finish my pillar pair chapter in ff.net. How do you update so fast anyway?
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 12:44 pm (UTC)
Intriguing. Keep working hard!

Ha, there's no secret to it. It's just that I spend the majority of my spare time writing. And also that I don't usually start posting a fic until the bulk of it is written, so the breaks between posting times are mostly just me proof-reading and embellishing (and getting distracted by other projects). :P

I NEVER TIRE OF THAT AVATAR. NEVER. Just wanted to reiterate that.
iluxia
Jun. 4th, 2008 12:17 pm (UTC)
SHUURYOU OMEDETO~!!!

IT'S DONE~~!!

Awesome story, btw. I love how you capture Tezuka and Ryoma's relationship so... perfectly! @.@ *goes to write her own stories* Nothing like inspiration from fellow writers!
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 10:56 am (UTC)
Why thank you! ^__^ Excellent, I shall be looking forward to more marvellous works from you then.
missselarne
Jun. 4th, 2008 12:36 pm (UTC)
XDD Yes, yes, we all want to stay and watch them kiss.

♥ So...what's next? =3
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:05 am (UTC)
MURDER FIC.

Not very TezRyo, unfortunately (though Tezuka always works his way into the story as a major player SOMEHOW). However I'll probably post it as a really long one-shot, because to split it into three chapters would just be mean.

There's a bunch of other fics in the works, too, but that's the one that will be finished first. :)
ichinonaru
Jun. 4th, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
“You’re definitely staying, even if I have to tie you down with wire,” Tezuka said sternly.

“Kinky,” Ryoma muttered.

Gawd my imagination ran rampant and well... waaaah i can't stop squealing! I'm here in my room and... I'm gonna reread this chapter over and over again! waaaaahhhhh the KIss... waaaah I'd like to comment everything back to you and uhm... yeah, im sure you get that a lot but... waaaaaah... ok.. i cant form a coherent thought.. lemme reread the story and I'll try to get back to you...
ichinonaru
Jun. 4th, 2008 02:20 pm (UTC)
Aaaah I still can't calm down... why does it feel like I have lots of questions to ask... well... its unimportant anyway.. but waaah, I can't believe that Buchou let his guard down! W00t, he's not yudan sezu ni ikou-ing! HAHAHHA! I like the part where there was a hint of panic in Tezuka's voice... very human... unlike how he is usually depicted (stoic and all). Hm... Echizen sure is lucky... haha well in any case Seigaku is unique and I'm glad he's got a home now.
I'm really looking forward to more fics and we'll be awed by your prowess yet again, I'm sure...
~Hikari Manganji~
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:10 am (UTC)
Heee, thanks for all your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
su24
Jun. 4th, 2008 02:13 pm (UTC)
~sigh~ wut a wonderful fluffy ending :D...but why do your fics make me wish that tezuka or ryoma or someone will eventually kill nanjiroh and chop him into pieces and feed them to the piranha?!?!
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:15 am (UTC)
Yeah, I've noticed that trend too. -___-;; As much as I really do LIKE Nanjiroh, apparently there is a subconscious hatred. He makes a damn good villain, so I have decided to embrace this rather than fight it. Do not expect this trend to change (though there's chance of it moving on to Yukimura).
willidan
Jun. 4th, 2008 02:17 pm (UTC)
I find it hard to believe that Tezuka forgot everyone was in the room with them; but it kinda makes sense that Ryoma would have that affect on him.;) I couldn't understand how nobody knew he was sneaking out; they certainly had me fooled. Nice job. And great story!
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:17 am (UTC)
You very acutely picked out my biggest dilemma with this - ninja are meant to be really good at being sneaky, so there was heaps that I actually COULDN'T foreshadow, because that would make them lousy ninja. *headdesks*. Seems to have worked out okay, though. Thanks for reading!
tezukaryo
Jun. 4th, 2008 02:58 pm (UTC)
Aaaaah, Tezuka, no "100 LAPS NOW"...couldn't wait to get your hand on Ryoma with the others still there...I wonder how far would the go if Momo did not interrupt *grin wickedly*...

OMG, Fuji=lovelovelove, meddlesome ninja at work, indeed *grin*...LOL with the paperwork scheme and Horio's direction sense...

Sinn, this is wonderful...thank you and looking forward to your next story. *hugs* ^___^
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:20 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading and commenting so much! ♥♥♥
sleepingfingers
Jun. 4th, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
That was an awesome ending! :D :D Tezuka's actions at the end are amusing and so sweet.

“I would sort of like to stay,” Fuji remarked.

Oh, Fuji! ♥

kishmet
Jun. 4th, 2008 05:52 pm (UTC)
Eee, this fic is so awesome! I'd read the first few chapters and fallen behind, so I figured now that you were finished, it'd be a good time to catch up. And it most certainly was! *bounces* This has put me in such a good mood today.

I love the parallels to canon and to the regulars' special moves, ehehe. And Tezuka and Ryoma's relationship, sfdljg so perfect and wonderful. ♥ Haha, I figured out fairly quickly that Nanjiroh hadn't meant to send Ryoma to seduce Tezuka. You pulled that bit off so nicely, and then, oh, the emotional pieces that occurred after Ryoma broke up with Tezuka. I wanted to kick Nanjiroh's arse myself for that one. *isdork*

Seigaku really was a very weird clan, but Ryoma didn’t mind. Last line love! Though now... is it a bad thing that I want more in this universe? Ninja!Seigaku are addictive!
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:29 am (UTC)
Hee, it was pretty obvious, but then, that was the point. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

Well, you know what they say about leaving people wanting more... but it is tempting to keep writing this universe, definitely. Ninja are awesome. Seigaku is awesome. Somehow, there should be more of this combination. .___. I already sort of miss it. (WHY DO SEIGAKU WORK SO WELL IN ANY UNIVERSE AND CONTEXT?)
pat_ace87
Jun. 4th, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
Wonderful.... just like always ^-^!!!!! You never fail to gift us with great TezyRyo stories, and I hope you don't stop doing it.... because you would really be missed if you do ._. .....
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:30 am (UTC)
I doubt I'll go anywhere anytime soon. Even if I were to wander, the Tezuka zone would pull me back. XP

Thanks for reading!
firedraygon97
Jun. 4th, 2008 06:44 pm (UTC)
*cackles in glee* Hurrah!! I totally knew Inui would piece that letter together. Oh gosh, I can just picture it -- kneeling at a table with tweezers and a magnifying glass...XD

Heeeee, and Tezuka getting flustered about kissing Ryoma in front of the others is just so cute. I love it when Tezuka loses his cool, even if just for a second.

I'm sorry to see this ninja AU come to an end, but it was definitely fun while it lasted. Looking forward to the next project you pull out! Please write more soon!
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:45 am (UTC)
Thanks! For reading, and all the comments too. :)

Shorter projects for a while, methinks. Bah, who am I kidding?
jade_peace
Jun. 4th, 2008 09:58 pm (UTC)
So I've promised myself that as soon as you posted this, I would print it, not read it, and bring it to the free day at school on Friday to read. I hope I can hold that promise out.

Wheee~ ♥ It's finished! I'm so happy now and will have an insanely hard time not reading, but that's okay. I will comment as soon as I finish reading!
jade_peace
Jun. 8th, 2008 02:56 am (UTC)
OKAY OKAY OKAY OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD.

*DEAD DEAD DEAD*

♥♥♥

I LOVE YOU SO HARD SINN. FUJI. AND INUI. OH MY GOD. AND TEZUKA. MOMOSHIRO. THEM LOVING EACH OTHER. THE LAST LINE. THROWING UP. PUTTING THE LETTER TOGETHER. THE CANON. AND AMAZINGNESS.

*HUGS YOU AND TEZURYO AND GIVES YOU ALL COOKIES*
pharrezychica
Jun. 4th, 2008 10:26 pm (UTC)
Awww!!!
Such a beautiful final chapter but part of me is sad to see this story ends! ♥

You were right, I didn't guess that Tezuka was 'playing' Ryoma at the beginning at all, such an interesting twist!
And I love your Tezuka in this story... somehow he feels stronger than how he's usually portrayed in TezuRyo stories. He's the one in control >D

Loved it all girl, lovedlovedloved!!! <3333
sinnatious
Jun. 5th, 2008 11:48 am (UTC)
I'm sort of sad it is over too. T___T It was fun to write.

Tezuka has become a bit ukefied in fandom, hasn't he? But then, one just needs to read some of Valiant's super-seme doujin, and things even themselves out.

Thank you for reading! ♥
ankoku_tenshi
Jun. 5th, 2008 12:06 am (UTC)
WAH.

That was such a nice ending scene. And Ryoma feeling like he's part of a family now....


♥♥♥♥

You did a wonderful job.
tearstreak
Jun. 5th, 2008 08:42 am (UTC)
Hahaha, I loved it! The last scene made me laugh out loud in the shriekiest way possible. ♥

Edited at 2008-06-05 08:42 am (UTC)
agentlerain
Jun. 5th, 2008 10:13 am (UTC)
"I would sort of like to stay." =D Ah, Fuji, who knew he was a voyeur?

I loved that in the end, Tezuka isn't truly angry. And they're having kinky talk while the rest of Seigaku is still there. XP

What an awesome fic. Can't wait to see what else is coming!
hyper_airis
Jun. 5th, 2008 09:23 pm (UTC)
God this is awesome. ♥

I read it in one go and I really loved it. The parallelism of some events to the series made me squee all over and the developmet of the relationship between Tezuka and Ryoma was frustrating but worthwhile.

GOD HOW I LOVE YOUR FUJI. I believe my favorite line in this entire fic would be "Oh, I was just wondering who is hurting the most in this. Is it Sakuno, is it Tezuka… or is it you?" It is totally like Fuji to say this as his final statement to Ryoma at that moment. And it was just a great stab to my heart that at that moment, Ryoma was finally realizing that it isn't just Tezuka's feelings that he should be questioning (having no reaction after the break-up, I mean).

I shower you with ♥s and virtual cookies for this. I'm looking forward to more of your fics. \o/
sinnatious
Jun. 7th, 2008 09:22 am (UTC)
VIRTUAL COOKIES! *omnomnomnom*

Thanks very much. :D
kurorinslvr
Jun. 6th, 2008 12:49 am (UTC)
i love it and you too for writing such a sweet, entertaining fic Ahhh

I started to read it in at ffnet. but i couldn't wait for more chapters so i checked out here hehe ^-^, .
m3owchan
Jun. 6th, 2008 01:41 am (UTC)
xD Oh Tezuka.. and Ryoma, forgetting that everyone was still there.. and Inui, I can just imagine him putting the letter back together~<3
superultragddya
Jun. 6th, 2008 01:55 am (UTC)
HELLO, TEZUKA. *___________________*
saturnsdaughter
Jun. 9th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that everything turned out all right in the end. I wasn't sure how you'd make it so Ryoma could stay with them, but what you did worked.
The last scene was really cute; I love that they got romantic while everyone was watching :)
Great story!
tintin013
Aug. 10th, 2008 01:11 am (UTC)
very nice!!! i love it! is this the end of your story?:)
sinnatious
Aug. 10th, 2008 02:07 am (UTC)
Yes, last chapter, no follow-ups. :) Glad you enjoyed it! (And your avatars are adorable. :D)
morbidreamscape
Nov. 9th, 2009 07:39 pm (UTC)
Mmm... TeniPuri ninja AU... this fic gave me the warm fuzzies (and filled my WAFF meter right up after the pummeling it got after reading your Tezuka and Ryoma death-fics).

I don't suppose a pirate AU might be in the works...? *blatant request*

Thanks for writing! ^______^ I'm going to wander around and read more of your fics now.
sinnatious
Nov. 11th, 2009 11:23 am (UTC)
Thanks for commenting!

Pirate AU... interesting... :D
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